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DIWO

Nadiah Raman

Saturday, Feb 17, 2018 - 01:23:14 am

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We all know of the common term ‘DIY’ which stands for Do It Yourself. DIWO on the other hand stands for Do It With Others and it is pretty self-explanatory. It is basically an approach that enables the collaboration between people in making art. Through DIWO, people get to create collective works which shapes fresher perspectives that would not have Read more →

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I was very impressed with your conclusion:
All in all, I am for DIWO. I feel that it is a great way to sustain human interactions with the rise of technology that may be slowly isolating us from it. Through collaboration and negotiation, people are able to create works far beyond what they could have managed singly.
I thought this was a very powerful statement and perfectly sums up the important, meaning, and dynamic of collaborative interaction in the form of DIWO. What would strengthen your essay is more specific examples from the essay by Marc Garrett, as well as his lecture. I do want to say though that you did an excellent job bringing in examples from the class and you supported them very well. If you had supported your very insightful conclusion with concrete examples from Furtherfield and the Garrett lecture, the essay would have been perfect!

Collective Genius: DIWO!!

ROS FARZANA

Friday, Feb 16, 2018 - 01:17:40 pm

@ Farz

The Furtherfield community is a common space for individuals from all over the world to to collaborate, critique and share works. Connections in art is very important. When art is shared with and collaborated with others, the outcome and extent of the art can be further pushed.

‘As an artist-led group, Furtherfield has become progressively more interested in the cultural value Read more →

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I like how u made a relation between Marc Garrett's example of Blockchain with the micro-project we did! From there we can truly understand the beauty of DIWO, of how collaborative efforts can convert into something very unique.
I really liked how you noted the element of surprise in Felicia's and mine's Tele-Stroll -  there are almost different types of DIWO here. One that Felicia and I could predict (we had planned out our "types" beforehand) and the 'unpredictable' type of DIWO, as you have pointed out. Thank you for noticing that aspect; I wouldn't have particularly made that distinction otherwise! :-)
Wonderful essay and nicely written. I thought you captured the quality and spirit of Furtherfield very effectively. My main comment is to find a way to end your essay more conclusively. For example, you mention very briefly that the Adobe Connect session was beneficial because it allowed you to interact with others. How? This would have been a perfect opportunity to talk about how we incorporated the DIWO concept in our online interactions to form various collaborative moments, colors, signs, etc. through the telematic embrace. Just as you effectively described the Plantoid project, a stronger ending would have been to discuss how our own micro-projects employed similar ideas and techniques.

Who's talking?

ROS FARZANA

Thursday, Feb 08, 2018 - 04:24:12 pm

@ Farz

The video starts with a zoomed in clip of a girl in a video talking. The camera slowly zooms out to reveal more videos of other individuals. Their voices start to merge and you cannot hear a single voice.

Hello World is ‘an immersive video installation featuring over 5000 video diaries found on the internet’, all framed on a big screen that Read more →

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(Sorry I was late getting to this essay, somehow I missed it when I was going through this week's research critiques.) Excellent! I was very impressed how you picked up on the irony of a multitude of voices all speaking simultaneously, at the same time, like a chorus, but without a true connection between them. Isn't that often the condition of social media? We are all posting, sharing, etc., but are we heard? Well, I think sometimes yes, but many times we are just lone voices in the crowd as so beautifully demonstrated in Christopher Baker's Hello World. I thought this was a very fine essay that asked some interesting questions about alienation, separation, individuality, the real and the virtual. Excellent.

Telegarden // A Change in Perspective

Daphne Tan

Thursday, Feb 08, 2018 - 03:15:14 pm

@ WILDFLOWER

When we hear the word “gardening”, it usually involves physical soil space, a hand trowel, seeds, watering can. What the Telegarden team have created in 1995 has totally changed our perspective of gardening, replacing our hands with cursors and mouse clicks. Each action in the Telegarden, totally controllable at the comfort of your home, through a screen.

This web-interface allows netizens Read more →

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Excellent research and glad to see you found the quote of mine from a very long time ago! Your description of the Telegarden is quite good and covers many of the key concepts about gardening at a distance. The only thing missing is the reference to the work as a collective artwork, how its use for social interaction was one of the key elements of our discussion of collective narrative. Otherwise, this a very fine essay.

Please Change Beliefs: An Analysis

Bala

Thursday, Feb 08, 2018 - 01:51:14 am

@ Bala's OSS

“Please Change Beliefs” is Jenny Holzer’s first project on the World Wide Web. She is famous for her Truisms – they’ve been displayed on storefronts, billboards, and other public places, such as Times Square in New York. A great number of people have derived pleasure and provocation from them. With “Please Change Beliefs” (1997), that number grows all the Read more →

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This is excellent research! I was particularly impressed with your comparisons to social media, and how this kind of collective discourse is now common place on Twitter and Facebook. You presented in extremely detailed analysis of the work and its various components, as well as adding some critical commentary yourself regarding improvements to the work. Truly excellent and top notch research critique!!
Thanks Mr Packer, I'll continue to do my best!

PLEASE clap if you BELIEFS

EC Chee

Thursday, Feb 08, 2018 - 01:15:35 am

@ 遠き世に

The truth is malleable: this is a statement brazenly declared by Jenny Holzer’s work, Please Change Beliefs. In this artwork, Holzer provides a list of truisms on a website, where anyone may access and modify as many truisms as they’d like to. These edited truisms are then permanently added to an online database, creating an extensive list of Read more →

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Very good comments about the relationship between truth and fiction. That is precisely what Jenny Holzer is getting us to think about: how there are variations on truth, to the point where the truth is blurred in so many individual perspectives. And of course as you point out, isn't that the problem in today's media culture! One comment: don't forget to incorporate statements from the reading that supports your research critique.
Interesting analysis of this piece of work. I like how you drew links from this piece of work to our present society as well as raising important questions which we can think about. :D

The World’s First Collaborative Sentence 1994 - Pioneer of The Multiple Authorship

Bella Dai

Wednesday, Feb 07, 2018 - 11:00:16 pm

@ belladaiyunlang

Douglas Davis, the creator of one of the earliest artwork on the world wide web, The World’s First Collaborative Sentence 1994. It allows everyone to contribute words, video, photographs, sounds and etc. to this long sentence in the collective third space. It was commissioned by the Lehman College Art Gallery, Bronx, N.Y. and The City University of New York, with Read more →

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Very good! And while it is interesting and relevant to bring in the Duolingo project, I would recommend focusing on the artwork you have been asked to critique, with perhaps a short reference to similar works. The research critiques are so short and compact that it is best to concentrate on the assignment work. One other recommendation, make the images larger when you insert them, there is a menu that allows various sizes, that way they are easier to read without having to click and enlarge. Good research though and glad to see you are grasping the idea of the collective artwork.

Together, a story of many

Elizabeth Quek

Wednesday, Feb 07, 2018 - 09:27:39 pm

@ A blog for Liz

Week 3 Essay

Artwork title: Hello World! or: How I Learned to Stop Listening and Love the Noise

Artist: Christopher Baker

Medium: Multi-channel multimedia installation

Year created: 2008

The Review

Hello world is a video installation where 5,000 video diaries of various individuals are played along a wall. The people in the videos can be seen speaking in their rooms, kitchens, a space of comfort.

Walking into the Read more →

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Excellent point! I am really glad to see you have made the important distinction between the live and the pre-recorded. So in that sense, since there is no communication between the makers of the YouTube, except through the positioning of the videos on the wall, I am not sure if I would truly call that the third space, which implies there is communication, either synchronous or asynchronous. But your comparison is well taken. Be sure and include an actual quotation from the reading, in this case, the Collective Artwork section of the Open Source Studio essay. You reference, but I would like to see a quote that supports your argument. Good work!

The World’s Longest Collaborative Sentence

Cecilia HyunJae Cho

Wednesday, Feb 07, 2018 - 09:23:53 pm

@ C.C.H.J.CHO

The World’s Longest Collaborative Sentence

“The Sentence has no end. Sometimes I think it had no beginning. Now I salute its authors, which means all of us. You have made a wild, precious, awful, delicious, lovable, tragic, vulgar, fearsome, divine thing.”

– Douglas Davis, 2000

https://vimeo.com/254464244

What is “The World’s Longest Collaborative Sentence”?

“The World’s Longest Collaborative Sentence” is an collaborative and collective network based Read more →

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This is excellent! So many unknowns when Douglas Davis created this work, where the sentence would lead, how the links would be broken, and how it stand the test of time as a record of net culture in the early days of the Web. This is very well researched and written, with excellent use of references. One comment: don't forget to use the featured image, though I am impressed you provided a screen capture of the site!

research critic on Jenny Holzer's Please Change Believes

Tan Xiang Rei

Wednesday, Feb 07, 2018 - 07:03:55 pm

@ REI

Jenny Holzer’s please change believes, is a work base on the world wide web, where she invites the audiences to contribute and change the given truism. Her body of work focuses on the delivery of words and ideas in public spaces. These short truisms are very direct and are very obvious for us.  However, by inviting the viewers to Read more →

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Hi Rei! It's interesting that you mention that each truism is influenced by one's own culture and experiences. Since it's a reflection of oneself, the truism gives us a tiny glimpse into that particular person's life!
Very important comment you have made about how Please Change Beliefs gives wider forms of expression to the collective artwork. Rather than one person's "truth" it is the "truth" of many, such that there is not such thing as a single truth, particularly in the age of the Internet where everyone can weigh on an idea. I would recommend in your research critiques that you provide additional detail about the specifics of the work, perhaps describing one of the truisms you altered, such as "HUMOR IS A RELEASE," which I can see that you selected. It would be helpful to step through the process of how you changed the truism.