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Art History Essay : Proposal

Christy Stephanie

Monday, Mar 07, 2016 - 07:47:58 pm

@ Christy Stephanie


Chinese Buddhist Art – What is it?

Buddhist art – Art forms that depicts subject matters that originates from the religion of Buddhism.

– Chinese Buddhist art – Buddhist art that originated from China.

– It will inevitably have international influences as even the religion was initially Indian.

– As time went by, it changed mainly in terms of aesthetics despite similar intended purpose. Read more →

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You have chosen two nice objects to compare! But, we need to work more on that introduction. It needs more details. You have a few interesting ideas hidden in your paragraph on similarities--which of these is going to be your thesis? Your paragraph on differences needs to be much more stronger--what is different? subject matter, composition, patronage?

ART HISTORY: Essay Proposal

Feliciana Natali

Monday, Mar 07, 2016 - 05:29:37 pm

@ Feligood

What is Chinese tomb art?

Definition of tomb art. What is tomb art in Chinese culture, hence what makes chinese tomb art different from other culture’s tomb art. The purpose of tomb art for Chinese: religious, social, personal functions.

Compare two bronzes from the Shang dynasty.

Form of tomb art during the Shang dynasty: bronzes. Types of bronzes found. Brief information on Royal tombs and their burial Read more →
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Nice introduction! But, you need to speak of bronze as well in the introduction. Have they really found a commoner's tomb from the Shang period that has Shang bronzes? Your current claim is a good start but it has the verb "is." Does it really come from your comparison? The claim should be framed as a comparison (i.e. similarities and differences).

Histories of Art II: Essay Proposal

Alfred Yeo

Sunday, Mar 06, 2016 - 02:58:10 pm

@ alfredoodles

What is Chinese tomb art? Compare two terracotta figures from the Qin dynasty.


Explanation of Chinese tomb art Information of the Qin dynasty Information of the First Emperor Information of the terracotta army Tentative claim: Why would the terracotta army have such individually different facial features even in a time when communism is so strong? One theory is that the First Emperor believe in an after Read more →
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*Good introduction. How can you flesh out that first part about "explanation of Chinese tomb art?" *I am glad to see that you will discuss the Qin dynasty briefly before zeroing in on the tomb warriors. *The current claim is a bit grand. You can do it for a Ph.D. thesis! Let's try to write a short comparison essay. So, frame your claim as a comparison. Include similarities and differences.

Essay Proposal

Lin Chenyue

Saturday, Mar 05, 2016 - 12:29:17 am

@ lin

Essay Topic: What is Chinese tomb art? Compare two bronzes from the Shang dynasty.

Sources of information:

National Museum of China website The Palace Museum of China Books: Early Chinese Art from Tombs& Temples, The Arts of China, Art in China etc.

Tentative Structure of essay

Introduction of Chinese Tomb Art:

Origin of Chinese Tomb Art Chinese tomb art is funerary art Belief in afterlife, religion, human sacrifice Types of vessels Skills & materials Functions: Daily usage; Read more →
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This is a good start. I appreciate your detailed introduction. Curious--were bronze vessels really used in daily life? Please check on this. Claim is too broad for now. You could be writing a Ph.D. thesis on this topic! But, you do seem to have an interesting idea lurking behind the question "what are the meanings behind these changes?" It is still too broad. So, please find a claim from the nice comparison you have chosen to do by framing your claim as a comparison (i.e. similarities and differences).

Idea Proposal: Essay

Iskandar Ruhaizat

Friday, Mar 04, 2016 - 05:26:03 pm

@ Sang Musang

What is Chinese Buddhist art? Compare two sculptures and address the question of change in art and religion when Buddhism arrives in China. The images need to be from lecture or from the Asian Civilizations Museum.

Realised I’ve done my essay wrongly (skewering more towards theology and the comparison only occupies a small portion) so I redid my proposal.


Define Chinese Buddhist Read more →

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Your claim currently is a fact. No one can disagree with you. You need to come up with a claim that you can argue for. Do you need to discuss religious tolerance in your introduction? What does it have to do with your claim? The sculptures you are using do not have any bodhisattvas... You seem to have an idea in your statement about how earlier images are Buddhas and later images are bodhisattvas. How can you make this broad claim more specific?
Hi Sujatha, Yup I've decided to change the second image (the one with Shakyamuni and Prabutharatna) to that of Guanyin (will do up another post containing the image from ACM). For the claim I was going along the lines of whether Chinese Buddhist art is the sinicisation of Buddhist art coming in from India or the Indianisation of Chinese art. Will think of another claim just in case and post it on an updated proposal!

Week 4: Team One's Presentation

Iskandar Ruhaizat

Friday, Mar 04, 2016 - 03:18:15 pm

@ Sang Musang

I really enjoyed Team One’s presentation, as they took the effort to recreate the experience they had while visiting the Sri Mariamman Temple, from the puja to the scent of jasmine. Utilising Google 360° Tours really immerse the whole class into getting a better insight into the layout of the temple and the activities going on inside.

Kudos to you guys and can’t Read more →

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Week 2: Journal

Iskandar Ruhaizat

Friday, Mar 04, 2016 - 03:07:42 pm

@ Sang Musang

I need to make a habit of checking OSS. Sorry about this (and a few others) super belated posts!

“What is your favourite Buddhist Temple in Singapore? Why?”

First of all, I am guilty of generalising every Chinese temples as well, Chinese temples, disregarding the complexity of the various religions worshipped by the Chinese. Not only are there buddhist temples but also Read more →

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Essay Proposal


Friday, Mar 04, 2016 - 12:27:32 am

@ A150046

4. What is Chinese landscape painting? Compare Guo Xi’s Early Spring to a bird and flower painting by Emperor Hui-tsung.

Introduction – What is Chinese landscape painting (Definition) – Basic background information (How it started, etc?) – Claim: Chinese landscape paintings (of the same time period) can be very different (in terms of aesthetics)

Paragraphs – Discuss about Guo Xi’s Early Spring painting (Subject matter, composition, Read more →

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Good introduction. Begin with a definition and a brief history of your topic! Good start for a thesis--frame it as a comparison with similarities and differences! But, let's be more specific. Let's take care of your first phrase--What is special about this time period? What is influencing both painters? Ask yourself whether you want to do the lumping method? Look at the examples of comparison essays and paragraphs on NTULearn in the folder called "Second Assessment." Is there another way to organise tis essay?

Question 1 essay proposal

Fernandez Leong

Thursday, Mar 03, 2016 - 12:36:57 pm

@ fleong005

Hi there,

Below is the essay proposal format I have for art history. It is still very rough but has a layout of what I am intending to focus on for each paragraph.

Proposal format for question 1: 

What is Chinese tomb art? Compare two bronzes from the Shang dynasty. OR compare two terracotta figures from the Qin dynasty.


What is Chinese tomb art? Why Read more →
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Good plan for the introduction. How do you plan to transition between a general notion of tomb art and the First Emperor's version of tomb art? You claim needs to be more specific. It is currently grand and broad. Your claim also need to come from your comparison. It needs to be frames as a similarities and differences statement. So, what are their similarities and differences? Where is your bibliography?

Art History: Research Assignment Proposal


Thursday, Mar 03, 2016 - 11:26:19 am

@ bella's

Research Assignment Proposal

What is Chinese landscape painting? Compare Guo Xi’s Early Spring to a bird and flower painting by Emperor Hui-tsung.


Define Chinese landscape painting Characteristics of Chinese painting Briefly introduce the two artworks: Guo Xi’s Early Spring and Emperor Hui-tsung’s Five-coloured parakeet Essay aims to compare the two artworks in terms of subject matter, technique, composition and purpose (differences and similarities)


Subject matter

Early spring: Read more →
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Good introduction. You have a plan! Thanks for including your bibliography! But, it has two old sources... YO also haven't covered your three types of sources... You have an idea! the last sentence in your first body paragraph! Purpose and context is a bit weak... But there is a point there too about art and poetry! The essay is well organized--well done! Let's keep working!