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Histories of Art II: Week 8 Introduction and Paragraph

Alfred Yeo

Saturday, Mar 12, 2016 - 12:10:22 am

@ alfredoodles

What is Chinese tomb art? Compare two terracotta figures from the Qin dynasty.

Chinese tomb art was started with the belief of an after life and that early rulers has to be provided even after they pass, similarly like an extension of their worldly life. The most prominent example of this was set in the Qin dynasty which was reigned by Read more →

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The introduction looks good, but it is a bit rushed. What if you give us a few examples of the variety of tomb art before you zero in on the tomb warriors? I am worried about your claim... You would have to have seen all 7000 warriors to make this claim--that all the seated arches are wearing protective gear while the standing ones aren't. Where is the plan for the paper? "The material of each terracotta figure were made differently to represent and accentuate their different roles as Emperor Qin’s warriors." Good topic sentences. But a bit confusing. All of them are made from clay. So, do you mean the material of their warrior garments? Good paragraphs. Perhaps you can say early on in your intro that there are multiple reasons why they look real. You can quote a few people. Then, say that in this essay you are focusing only on two or three points.

Art Hist Proposal Part II - Introduction

Darrenjh

Friday, Mar 11, 2016 - 10:30:11 pm

@ Darrenjh

What is Chinese Buddhism? Compare two sculptures and address the question of change in art and religion when Buddhism arrives in China. The images need to be from lecture or from the Asian Civilizations Museum.

Thesis: The proliferation of Buddhist art was largely brought about by extensive foreign trade. This ultimately, culminated ornate and ostentatious sculptures and art forms.

Introduction:

 

During the Tang Read more →

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The current thesis statement is too broad. It is also a fact. No can argue against you. So, create a thesis that addresses both similarities and differences. This is after all a comparison paper. Nice point about land and sea routes. So, let's say Silk Roads (make it plural). You introduction is very general. It needs to introduce your two objects (please see the sample). You also need to have a plan for the rest of the paper in your introduction.

RESEARCH PAPER: Introduction

Feliciana Natali

Friday, Mar 11, 2016 - 08:12:17 pm

@ Feligood

Question 1

Ancient China’s history is often related to what we call Chinese tomb art : things which are buried together with the deceased[1]. Ancient Chinese buried those grave goods in the form of ritual vessels, statues, precious stones and sometimes weapons because they believed tombs were the bridge between the livings’ world and the dead’s, hence the livings Read more →

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This is a good intro Feli! Do you need that first footnote? It has nothing to do with ancient China. Footnote 3 needs to be a shortened citation. Bower, From Court to Caravan, 22-23. The same goes for footnote 6. So, which ones is your thesis statement? "To a certain extent, the existence of bronze tomb art render eliteness." "However, they are merely products of Shang’s bronze industry, and not a fine art, because regardless of era, geography, and ownership, the bronzes share very similar shape and style." Try to create a thesis that addresses both similarities and differences. Where is your plan for the paper? You need a sentence that screams out "this is the plan for my paper!"
Okay! I will take down the first footnote then. The thesis is the second one, about bronzes being the products of an industry rather than a form of fine art. This thesis will use the similarities and differences between 2 fangding from two different tombs, different times of the Shang era, and different social status owners (an unknown man and lady Hao). I think I should make the sentence about this thesis clearer in the introduction. And yes I will prove my thesis by having two body paragraphs about shape comparison and style comparison. May I also put extra contextual analysis (a short third body paragraph) to make my thesis clearer? It would be about where the fangdings were from, and why such a 'seemingly royal' ritual vessel is found in a non-royal tomb?

Art History Essay: Introduction

Chio Jo Inng

Friday, Mar 11, 2016 - 06:36:18 pm

@ J O

Link to my proposal here.

Buddhism originally originated in India and spread to China as early as the second century B.C during the Han Dynasty, where Confucianism and Taoism beliefs were already a well-established school of thought for the citizens. Going against the already their values of relating oneself to family and the community, Buddhism instead focused on creating awareness Read more →

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Good start Jo! But we need some footnotes and some editing. *We all know that Buddhism began in India, but it is not general knowledge that Buddhism reached China in the 2nd century BCE. So, the first sentence needs a footnote. *Do we also need all this information? (2nd and 3rd sentence). Look at the textbook written by Richard Vinograd and Robert L. Thorpe in the ADM library for some great information about early Buddhism in China. *Who are these non-Han Chinese? Make your story more concrete. We also need dates. *So, are you going that the Longmont sculptures show Taoist and Confucian influences? *What is your plan for this paper?

Edited Proposal

Iskandar Ruhaizat

Friday, Mar 11, 2016 - 04:00:18 pm

@ Sang Musang

What is Chinese Buddhist art? Compare two sculptures and address the question of change in art and religion when Buddhism arrives in China. The images need to be from lecture or from the Asian Civilizations Museum.

Intro:

Define Chinese Buddhist art

Claim: Chinese Buddhist art flourished mainly due to the royal patronage of Buddhism.

Chinese Buddhist art is a complex collection of “images of Read more →

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Current claim is too broad. It is also a fact. No one can disagree with you. So, compare the two objects first (similarities and differences). Then, come up with a claim. There seem to be three paper topics in this edited proposal! You can write one on royal patronage. Another on trade. And a third on contact with other religions in China. Which one do you want to do?

Essay Proposal

Chio Jo Inng

Thursday, Mar 10, 2016 - 11:21:26 pm

@ J O

Chosen Question:

What is Chinese Buddhist art? Compare two sculptures and address the question of change in art and religion when Buddhism arrives in China. The images need to be from lecture or from the Asian Civilizations Museum.

Introduction Paragraph:

Buddhism originated in India Spread to China around the 1st/2nd century Gained traction during the late Han Dynasty, and experienced new heights of popularity in Read more →
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Your current thesis statement is too broad. It is also a fact. In other words, no one can disagree with you. Make a thesis statement that addresses both similarities and differences. Where is your plan for the paper? Your first and second paragraph would be stronger if they were about the comparison. So, weave in the contextual analysis into all paragraphs. Don't make it a separate paragraph, unless you have to.

Revised Proposal

Gekkie

Thursday, Mar 10, 2016 - 05:52:07 pm

@ 風鳴る翼

Introduction:

-What is chinese tomb art.

-about Qin dynasty (when Qin shi huang got his throne)

-short intro about Qin Shi Huang

– why did he plan to build this tomb

-the reason behind him about his placement of the tomb.

-The terracotta warriors pits are purposely placed facing the east, guarding the emperor against his possible “enemies”

overall introduction about this tomb. (56sq km etc)

Compare between Read more →

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Art History Essay : Proposal

Christy Stephanie

Monday, Mar 07, 2016 - 07:47:58 pm

@ Christy Stephanie

INTRODUCTION:

Chinese Buddhist Art – What is it?

Buddhist art – Art forms that depicts subject matters that originates from the religion of Buddhism.

– Chinese Buddhist art – Buddhist art that originated from China.

– It will inevitably have international influences as even the religion was initially Indian.

– As time went by, it changed mainly in terms of aesthetics despite similar intended purpose. Read more →

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You have chosen two nice objects to compare! But, we need to work more on that introduction. It needs more details. You have a few interesting ideas hidden in your paragraph on similarities--which of these is going to be your thesis? Your paragraph on differences needs to be much more stronger--what is different? subject matter, composition, patronage?

ART HISTORY: Essay Proposal

Feliciana Natali

Monday, Mar 07, 2016 - 05:29:37 pm

@ Feligood

What is Chinese tomb art?

Definition of tomb art. What is tomb art in Chinese culture, hence what makes chinese tomb art different from other culture’s tomb art. The purpose of tomb art for Chinese: religious, social, personal functions.

Compare two bronzes from the Shang dynasty.

Form of tomb art during the Shang dynasty: bronzes. Types of bronzes found. Brief information on Royal tombs and their burial Read more →
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Nice introduction! But, you need to speak of bronze as well in the introduction. Have they really found a commoner's tomb from the Shang period that has Shang bronzes? Your current claim is a good start but it has the verb "is." Does it really come from your comparison? The claim should be framed as a comparison (i.e. similarities and differences).

Histories of Art II: Essay Proposal

Alfred Yeo

Sunday, Mar 06, 2016 - 02:58:10 pm

@ alfredoodles

What is Chinese tomb art? Compare two terracotta figures from the Qin dynasty.

Introduction:

Explanation of Chinese tomb art Information of the Qin dynasty Information of the First Emperor Information of the terracotta army Tentative claim: Why would the terracotta army have such individually different facial features even in a time when communism is so strong? One theory is that the First Emperor believe in an after Read more →
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*Good introduction. How can you flesh out that first part about "explanation of Chinese tomb art?" *I am glad to see that you will discuss the Qin dynasty briefly before zeroing in on the tomb warriors. *The current claim is a bit grand. You can do it for a Ph.D. thesis! Let's try to write a short comparison essay. So, frame your claim as a comparison. Include similarities and differences.