We just did this in class a couple hours ago but I’ll do the scene analysis for my own reference as well to better prepare me for the actual scene.
Scene: Within school compound, close to destination.
Scene description / vision:
This scene happens as Abel is in the taxi, close enough to the school building but not close enough to make it Read more →
Updated message: Today is 26 Sep, Monday. I’m rewriting my script again but for 2 characters only. Will post it here soon.
Original post: Yes, I could make it 4 pages. I didn’t think of a twist to the tale also. Thanks for reading. tar_23sep
Dear Prof. Sebastian,
Here is the script analysis (for version 4.4) and additional information which I decided to add after seeing what Jack (from g1) did.
1. Long takes. 2 or 3 or 4 long takes can be used for the film. Why? I appreciate coverage, but after doing a documentary for two months, I’m sick of it.
2. Tracy is not the Read more →
Scene analysis of “Con-fident” Scene 1.
Characters: Establishing the relationship between Scammer and his Colleague, which clearly shows that Scammer does the bidding of Colleague much to his annoyance. Scammer is a ‘small time ah beng’; all talk but no bite. Whereas Colleague is much older, scarier and higher ranked than Scammer. Colleague likes to take advantage of Scammer and make him do his bidding.
Camera Read more →
Nothing much has been changed. Just that this version has dialogues both in Chinese and Singlish. Co-written by Dylon Goh.
Here is the 2nd draft, still slightly lengthy will revise and cut down a bit more.
I have changed my title to “Let go”
This is my third draft with the help of my script editor HAZEL LEONG! 🙂
I’m thinking of using a static camera and longer shots which require slightly complex blocking, like in old black-and-white movies when the movie camera was less mobile. So there is less focus on the editing- the viewer will see more of the ‘pure performance’ from the actors.
Edit: changed the lights setup Extreme example of what it could feel like: from Abbas Kiarostami’s Read more →
Will have to change the title to “SD Card” maybe. tar_17sep