After getting some feedback by Jesse and some of my classmates, here is the edited version of the script:
And here’s my first animatic. The scene starts after the climax, where the main character, Saira was hunted down by an officer in her doorstep. And she gets dragged to the police station where she is asked about her “breaking” the ceramic while she was in the museum previously.
mediums used for storyboarding: pencil sketches, pen, water colour
voiceovers: Gloria and Nic
sound effects: from Youtube