Based on the feedback gathered, I edited the title to make it fit better into my toy kit concept. I also changed my flat design into a “Table Top View” to make the composition more lively.
These are the feedbacks I got from the A2 B/W critique session:
1) The colour of the coffee is very distracting. (change to tea?)
2) The Cutting Matt is too bright (consider to make it darker)
3) Rearrange all the elements/adjust the layout.
4) NTFGH Logo can reduce in size slightly.
After making necessary arrangement I got people to vote for the preferred layout. “A” was still the first draft. Majority went ahead with “B”.