Feedback from first review

Why is it important to notice “noise” → benefits?
If this is a personal artistic problem, present it more toward your own motivations. Be bold and loud!
Sound or rhythm? Although related, they are also distinct. It’ll be good to focus. Scope needs to be tighter.
Why is it important to listen to what you’re leading us to listen to — the point?
What’s the message? Why should I be interested?
What can sound do to elucidate a message, meaning or reasons to re-look, re-see and re-listen? Right now it’s unclear in terms of a criticality of what we should be listening to. Provide more focus to what you intend to comment on.
Perhaps consider why it’s important for us to listen to things we forget.

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