Feedbacks:
- Thin down each element piece, to reduce the bulk of overall sculpture
- Concern regarding stagnant water in container
- Unify three sculptures, through mechanism
- Material concerns (in terms of thickness + Weight + Aesthetics)
- Solve weighted bottom
- Dang-ly weights on ‘fluffy’ sheet looks too rigid
- Name the sculpture
Improvisation made:
- General consensus that the three elements should remain independent of each other
- Dang-ly weights more spread out and poking in multiple directions
- Rainwater weighted mechanism ditched
- Carbon fibre
- Attempts to unify the 3 separated elements, but still looks chunky and heavy
- Dangly weights more spread out
- Thickness thinned down significantly
- Arrayed it 5 times around for more volume, since its a lot thinner now
- Added ‘feelers’ sprawling out from the centre
- Curved base to make structure more stable when rooted to the ground
- Fabrizio thought it was short and stubby, and decided to elongate it by stretching the structure. And it looked a lot more elegant and proportionate
- He also mentioned if the curved base was necessary, and suggested it to be just a straight line down, like a pole
- Will keep in view his pointers, as both of us thinks the pole would make the whole structure look like an exotic victorian street lamp
