Research Paper: Introduction, Thesis, and Body Paragraphs Published by Feliciana Natali Product Design student graduating in 2019 View all posts by Feliciana Natali
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Please don’t post the whole essay. I only wanted the intro and the paragraphs with a point posted. You will need to post the whole essay on turn-it-in on Sunday.
Anyway, is the thesis?
“However, despite being able to segregate social classes, bronze tomb arts are merely products of Shang’s bronze industry, and not a vessel for creativity.”
Is this the plan?
“Through shape and details comparison of fangding from Fu Hao’s tomb in Anyang and from an unknown tomb in Dayangzhou, Shang ritual bronzes are the proofs of ancient Chinese strict conformity.”
let’s rephrase these to make them clearer and stronger.