Here’s the first draft of my script – Disconnected.
My research on online suicide can be view here.
Read here – DISCONNECTED – DRAFT 1
I was thinking perhaps Joe doesn’t get the information about the stranger so easily. I personally feel that the story, although still seems more like a situation is more whole in terms of Joe’s character turning point as well as the setup – The stranger doesn’t tell Joe she wants to die. She just dies slowly. This creates a more “racing against time” element, which can be interesting.
Final Script here – disconnected-by-goh-ansen_final_24-sept-2016