After the critique session on my first design, I adjusted the following:

1. Decrease in point size of text
2. Change my arts and health full panel photo to just the logo and text itself
3. Change the background colour on the inside page of the brochure
4. Rearrange and add more elements to fill in some empty spaces and to ‘frame’ the text and photos

Initial design:

Refinement:

Seeing my peers doing die cuts, I wanted to explore on it too and hence made a die cut variation for this design

However, I realise that I did not consider my folding properly and the effect did not turn out well when I test printed:

Hence I decided to go with the design without die cut.