Link to Part 1 :
Premise
A baby turtle born with an abnormally large shell has to reach the water before it’s too late.
Reflections
- Did the storyboard/ story turn out as you hoped?
Yes.
- What would you do to improve it?
Add more dynamic camera angles and lengthen the duration for intense scenes, for example, when the turtle gets kicked around, and when the wave crashes onto the turtle.
- What skills do you need to improve?
More ‘clean’ and fluid line work to show a more organic character and sense of movement.
- What are the most significant things you have learned so far?
If you stare at your small thumb-nail sized panels for hours and hours, you will not be able to visualise the actual composition as a full screen image. Take a break and re-look at your storyboards in full screen, you will have a better judgement on composition