D E S I G N R E F I N E M E N T & M O C K U P
Feedback from the sharing session:
-Body copy is too big
– Characters should at least look like young adults
– Can add a couple of elderly
– Logo can only be in black and white or retain the original colour
Moving on with the feedback, I made several changes to the initial design by including a few elderly in the design and at the same time, changing the attire of the characters such that they appear more mature looking.
In the final design, I also changed the point size of the body copy and moved the boy in the scotch tape on the bottom left corner further upwards such that it would not overlap with the body copy.
It was also suggested that I could try out a more colourful palette, however, I find it rather difficult to work with so many colours with so many elements and hence, decided to stick with my monochromatic yellow colour scheme.