continue from task 1

From the feedback and mistakes made previously, I came up a new design:

• Using Complementary color to color code the different pages.
• (Orange page) Using matching illustration to fill up the empty page.
• (Green page) Simplify the illustration (so it can be identity by the phone)  and provide visual cue as the page’s number.
• Give a lot of bleeding to prevent misalignment

 

Results:

Border for the instruction

More issues:

Misalignment due to the thickness of paper

Messy layout

Weird imaginary

Bleeding issue and more misalignment

 Viewer cannot flip back the brochure accordingly.

Feedback:

• Leading
• Narrow margin
• Remove unnecessary border to resolve the misalignment issue
• Emphasis on the numbers
• Shift the game’s instruction to it’s own page

 

continue to the final task