1. Hi Matthew, this is generally decently cut together. You don’t cut every thing too short and give people the chance to talk a bit. I like the first guy who is like a rabbit in the headlights! Still there are shots that don’t pass the quality test – and these you should lose. Again, not enough establishers and perhaps some of the stories could have been encouraged to go longer/deeper. Take a look at the sequence as shot in “Chronicle of a Summer” and see the differences. Good exercise work overall however. Best wishes, Paul.