Hi Matthew, this is generally decently cut together. You don’t cut every thing too short and give people the chance to talk a bit. I like the first guy who is like a rabbit in the headlights! Still there are shots that don’t pass the quality test – and these you should lose. Again, not enough establishers and perhaps some of the stories could have been encouraged to go longer/deeper. Take a look at the sequence as shot in “Chronicle of a Summer” and see the differences. Good exercise work overall however. Best wishes, Paul.
Hi Matthew, this is generally decently cut together. You don’t cut every thing too short and give people the chance to talk a bit. I like the first guy who is like a rabbit in the headlights! Still there are shots that don’t pass the quality test – and these you should lose. Again, not enough establishers and perhaps some of the stories could have been encouraged to go longer/deeper. Take a look at the sequence as shot in “Chronicle of a Summer” and see the differences. Good exercise work overall however. Best wishes, Paul.