Here is our group’s updated script!
Please click here to read: Jaze:Jerry:Ziyu Script
Our see the screenshot preview below!
my journey in an arts school
Here is our group’s updated script!
Please click here to read: Jaze:Jerry:Ziyu Script
Our see the screenshot preview below!
There has been a tweak in the storyline now because Jerry will be joining Jaze and my scene! 🙂
Brief profiles
Ziyu as Laraine
Pleasant personality
Driven in career, and does not mind taking care of the household as well
She loves children and can’t wait to have a family
Jaze as John
Handicapped due to an accident
Cares for his wife but doesn’t show much due to his disability (inferior)
He loves children but is afraid of raising his kids as a handicapped father
Jerry as Mr Lim
Loves to help people around him
Neighbour of the couple
A young policeman who just started his career
Enjoys being the middleman/peacemaker
The storyline is pretty much the same as the previous post (click here), except that Laraine don’t walk off at the end, but instead, we have Mr Lim entering the scene halfway and try to mediate the couple.
Start:
– Laraine entering with mother care brochures, maternity magazines and pamphlets from a baby fair
– Her husband sits on his wheelchair doing nothing
– She tries to strike a conversation with him mentioning about her colleague’s children
– He knows her purpose of the conversation and was unhappy
Conflict:
– He insists on his point of not wanting a child
– She tries to be patient and explains a plan she has in mind
– He didn’t let her finish her lines and cuts in hopes of her dropping the idea
– Mr Lim enters the scene and tries to mediate the couple
End:
– The couple realizes that they care for each other too much which led them disagreeing with each other
We are still working on cutting down lines, but here is our draft!
Click here – screenplay draft
In a post two weeks ago (click here), I mentioned about my character’s profile, personality, and conflict with her partner. With those information, the scene would be some thing like what Jaze (profile) and myself performed in class – the wheelchair scene.
Start:
– Laraine entering with mother care brochures, maternity magazines and pamphlets from a baby fair
– Her husband sits on his wheelchair doing nothing
– She tries to strike a conversation with him
– He rejects and was all gloomy
– She approaches him and he spots the brochures before she manage to say anything, and he got angry
Conflict:
– He insists on his point of not wanting a child
– She tries to be patient and explains a plan she has in mind
– He didn’t let her finish her lines and cuts in hopes of her dropping the idea
End:
– She also got very unhappy
– ends of with a “FINE!” and storms off, leaving her husband alone and upset in the scene
For Laraine’s character arc, she’d start off with being slightly lethargic (end work), and then it shows her being patient to her husband, and still smiling a little. Her mood starts to turn more and more unhappy and disappointed at her husbands attitude, and she finally got angry at him and flares up.
working adult
Character’s profile:
Laraine
Mid 20s
Working adult
Has been in a relationship with her boyfriend (now husband) since secondary school
They just got married a year ago
Character:
Pleasant personality
Driven, and does not mind taking care of the household
She loves children and can’t wait to have a family
Conflict:
Her husband met an unfortunate accident and is paralysed
She could not understand his point of view (inferior) and insists on wanting a child