Hi. I’m Maung phyo win zaw U1531128B from your thursday afternoon watercolor class. I wanted to ask your feedback on some of the paintings so I know which one to work on the final painting. Also, is A2 size acceptable for the final assignment?
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Your tonal designs were quite good. However, when you work on the actual images, you did not follow what you have design. Change your color images to gray and you will see. And when you use colors, the high intensity color are all at their maximum. That needs a lot of design skills to balance these saturated colors. — You have pure green, red, orange everywhere. Hard to control. Try to find more intermediate colors to connect these strong colors together.
Your tonal designs were quite good. However, when you work on the actual images, you did not follow what you have design. Change your color images to gray and you will see. And when you use colors, the high intensity color are all at their maximum. That needs a lot of design skills to balance these saturated colors. — You have pure green, red, orange everywhere. Hard to control. Try to find more intermediate colors to connect these strong colors together.
Your layout of space is quite good. Gotta maintain it.