Feedback and critic from peers and tutor:

• colour as hierarchy – hot > cold, dark > bright – sequence
• orange first?
• mindful of the visual
• is the die cut for? – must have a purpose as it adds to the budget cost
• currently too bottom heavy
• cut out pictures to structure?
•  has a sense of unity
• could move some shapes down
• be aware of contrast – visual vibrations – scaling – visual depth – pulls things in
• doesn’t have to be continues
• words stagger
• special treatment for header box
• shape image
• tagline front – arts and health on the back
• bump text box 50%
• insert more images?