Critic and feedback from one on one meeting:
- currently the shapes compete over the body text – shrink down shapes
- integrate title to the bottom and integrate shapes into images
- remember margin
- crop image to tighten
- switch out the move with orange context
- need a sense of readiness
- the shape connection doesn’t need to be literal – broken lines
- title on the orange page or bold first line
- highlight art more
- keep back plain without shapes