Work in Progress Check

Critic and feedback from one on one meeting:

  • currently the shapes compete over the body text – shrink down shapes
  • integrate title to the bottom and integrate shapes into images
  • remember margin
  • crop image to tighten
  • switch out the move with orange context
  • need a sense of readiness
  • the shape connection doesn’t need to be literal – broken lines
  • title on the orange page or bold first line
  • highlight art more
  • keep back plain without shapes


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