Project 2: Zine (Part 3: Final Presentation)

Final Presentation Bedok Zine

I hope that after reading this zine, it would make your heart go BE-DOK BE-DOK!!!

Thank you to my Classmates, Friends and especially so to Mimi for helping me grow through this journey for this semester!

Comments:

“Love the seamless pages even though both pictures were not from the same location. The portrayal of Bedok left me wanting to explore the location more.”

“Wind can be expressed through the blowing/rustling of the trees!! I like how poetic it is, love the minimal style, simple. Maybe spacing can be better.”

“Good narrative overall. Notice a well use of perspective. Ends with a summary of the narrative like a storyboard which is excellent.”

“I really like your font work!! Feel like it’s a subtle way back to what you presented during your research! I really like the overall narrative of your zine and the moods. It flows quite nicely.”

“Good use of text placement, reading was smooth & effortless. Concept is obvious through copywriting. Good attempt at cubism style.”

“Like the poems and the overall vector design. But felt that the cover page was a different style from the rest.”

“The poem is deep and touching. I like the poem more than the graphic HAHAHAHA!”

“Can really feel the sentiment through your poem love it :)”

“Beautiful illustations, Malika vibes. Good improvement and poem gives rhythm and flow. Sad ending though :(“

“Hey Good job! I love your poem 🙂 You have improved a lot, well done!”