Hi all, so this will be my second process about my Zine.
DEVELOPMENT
As seen in Part 1, I wanted a blue hue. So I went onto illustrator to try it out. However, as you can see, it is too structured. I felt that hand-drawing it would look even better. So i stopped here and made a new drawing.
So here’s the one that i drew on. But the cons of this is that the tentacles ain’t as clear as the eyes. Also, one of the feedback that I got from Mimi was that since I’m going for a more ‘fun’ theme, I can extend out of the picture/canvas.
So yeahhh, i drew out of the lines and it looks nicer. But the feedback I received from friends are : Do you have to make the picture blue? Cause it doesn’t look like it fits the picture as a whole. So I changed the colour of the whole thing.
I tried black and white. But still doesn’t look as nice.
So finally, I decided to go for colours. Also, the feedback i got for this was to remove the frame around the photo and the extra space at the bottom. And I can change the colour of the building to be blue. (like previous designs)
So here it is. I agree that it looks much more put together compared to the rest.
RANDOM IN PROGRESS WORKS
Here are some random works I came up with while I was forcefully trying to fit in with the blue theme before deciding on the coloured theme. (These are works that I rejected)
Time is precious, use it wisely. But I thought I could add the bear to signify that it is precious and you shouldn’t let others ‘steal’ it??? (I’m sorry if I don’t make sense)
So here’s after I remove the bear.
I was wanting to make this into something like a rib-cage, but somehow I didn’t like it so I scraped the idea.
1ST DRAFT FRONT AND BACK COVER
Continuing on, here are my mockups for the front and back cover together with the layouts inside. The title/topic I was going for was “Jurong through my perspective”.
FRONT:
When Mimi saw this, her reaction wasn’t good at all. So of course I had to scrape the idea.
This is too messy and has nothing much to do with my main point. It is just all over and everywhere.
For this one, I couldn’t seem to fit any other elements from my zine layouts except for the tentacle monster. The rest just seems out of place.
A collage of the things that I will include in my zine. But just too messy and it looks bad.
1ST DRAFT LAYOUT
These are my layouts for my zine.
This is a drawing of a sperm whale getting stuck in between the bridge. (Mimi said this works well)
This architecture at Jurong Central Park is supposed to represent a hen’s nest. However, it feels too forced and cute. So Mimi said it doesn’t work well with the monster that I drew.
Also, this is too forced and doesn’t look good T_T (It’s a last minute thing that i came up with……)
This is also too forced and the actual architecture cannot be seen clearly.
This has the same problem as the hen’s. Too cute.
FEEDBACK:
Instead of thinking so much about this and that, why not just focus on the monster/cthulu/tentacle looking thing since that is my main focus. So I will need a story that revolves around this monster. Hence, all of these were made in vain :’) but it’s okay.