I now realise that we are supposed to change to a nursery rhyme for our final artwork, but I’ll upload my progress for this poem anyway since I’ve done quite a lot of exploration and I thought it would be interesting to share.
My concept
I had a lightbulb moment in the shower: I was thinking about the title- It Is Dangerous To Read Newspapers. Why is it dangerous? Margaret Atwood tells that her “passive eyes transmute everything [she] look[s] at”. Being surrounded by news of war since she was young, it has affected the way she sees the world. But for me, personally, I have been affected in a different way.
For me there are two ends of the spectrum:
- Everything you see is affected- the way you see the world is changed. You are so deeply troubled and disturbed.
- You are desensitised. You are not able to feel anything when you hear news- its just statistics and numbers to you.
Work-in-progress (using classmates’ dingbats as well!)
I created 5 compositions, and I’m not going to lie, I had quite a lot of fun doing these compositions! Even though I won’t be using these compositions at all, they were good practise anyway!
The images are based on the stanza:
“Even my/ passive eyes transmute/ everything I look at to the pocked/ black and white of a war photo/ how/ can I stop myself / It is dangerous to read newspapers”
(The slash represents the break in the lines)
So everything she sees becomes a war-like situation, even from nature. Nature is distorted. What she sees is affected by horrors of war. I used Nicholas Yoon’s lily, Eugene’s bees and Vimal’s buildings for these dingbats.
Struggles
I am a complete beginner to Photoshop, so it was quite embarrassing to say that I struggled with even the most basic things. I had to constantly refer back to video tutorials on Youtube- But I’ve learnt a lot by trial and error.
The problems I faced and how I overcame it
One of the problems I faced was when I pixelated some images, they were TOO pixelated that you could barely see any details. I kept watching tutorials and I was following everything that they said to do, but I still go the same result. (Turns out the images I was using weren’t large/ high res enough)….. -.-
In Part 2 of my progress I will be talking about my choice of English nursery rhyme, my concept and I will also be showing several compositions I played around with. Hopefully I’ll be able to tie in the new concept to this one!
Stay tuned!
Hi Widad! Wow……I’m quite blown away by bombing bees and lily guns in your composition. I like the contrast between something so innocent and natural (bees, lilies) and the man-made horrors (war, guns, bombings). It creates a strong voice, I’d say. And your composition is very appealing to the eye, as most of your works have been. I’d still say this is pretty. (: But in a different, deeper, (darker?) way.
Hi June! Thank you so much for your lovely comment! It made my day! I was quite disappointed knowing that we have to kind of abandon our poem as I already reached the point where I was brimming with ideas and was really excited with my concept- now I have to start from scratch again! :/ Can’t wait to see yours!