Raw drawings
– Needs improvement. Lines need to be straighter and cleaner. Would have liked to have seen your cylinder that was to be added in to the rectangular blocks. It is not seen in your raw drawings.
Photoshop drawing
-Looks to be redrawn digitally entirely – if so, this was not the intent.
– Shading is effective
Manual/Presentation
– Easy to follow step-by-step
– The starting identification of all the pieces to be used should include the base pieces too.
– Good set of simple instructions.