This is home~~ Truly~~(start singing)
To me, home is a place to relax your feet after travelling through the journey of life. A place to rest your heart after working day and night. Inside home, your loved ones will always be there waiting for your return and you will be at home thinking of your loved ones. 家是永远的避风塘！(Home is always the haven)
Lovely! I like that you’ve expressed a huge world of ideas with two drawings, they remind me of the warmth of Miyazaki’s worlds.
In terms of drawing, I’d suggest making the lines of the girl and grandma in the room darker so that their silhouettes stand out from the background. For the view of the house, you could try pushing it further with tones – give the sky a sort of 30% grey tone, the river 50%, and the shadow under the cliff of the house 80%. Good job!