The flowchart below indicates my progress with the narrative. Only 2 parts to go.
I’ve indicated ‘1’ and ‘2’ as there’s a slight change during that options.
- A suggestion provided with prof Don is to have a character yank the cables out as it allows the character to show more emotions.
- Character throws a rock as a form of distraction but due to his low accuracy, it hits the golem. Originally, the character sneaks around the golem, but felt it wasn’t as funny or interesting.
Storyboards and research are in my previous post. Other than the 2 changes, they’re pretty much still the same.
These are the updated boards for Act 1:
Not making the boards better… adding more details?
Definitely making them better, but I need to reorganize them..
I’ve updated with Act 1 boards. That’s basically the direction my boards are going.
Thanks for the update. The visual direction for the boards is great. Good use of perspective grids and tone to build up depth and contrast. If you are hard for time, don’t need to make the line art or drawings too polished. Now is the time to see if you need more panels to bridge the continuity in between shots eg. character action, inserts and etc.