Character Development

My character is a woman who ran away her marriage, leaving her daughter with the father. There are a few reasons as to why she did what she did: her expectations of her married life were not meant and she wanted something more. Also, there’s also a rift between her and her parents-in-law. Thus, to seek respite, she seeks the comfort of another man.

A year later, she received news that her child is severely sick. The conflict arose when she returned to the area, tried to find her child in the hospital. Once she found the room, however, the father was the one who opened the door. Despite her cries, the father did not allow her to see the child and she gets berated and humiliated but she didn’t particularly go hard against the father because ultimately, she was rendered by guilt.

The scene ends with the father slamming the door on her face and she walked away, rejected.

Author: Fits

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