Project 2- Locale

I think it’s a known fact that Singaporeans love to travel. It’s the bi-yearly mass exodus from boredom during the school holidays that happens every June and December. A solid proof that I wasn’t alone in my thinking. Living here for all my life, I always thought Singapore seemed…kinda lame and boring in comparison to other countries that had four weathers and a longer history, especially in art. Which I suppose was the first hurdle I had to cross when it came to this project.

Locale’s goal was for us to conduct research on a location in Singapore and find out what was unique and interesting about it before producing a Zine that encapsulates it’s essence.

Which of course came the problem of Where? I knew from the start that I didn’t really want to go anywhere very touristy. Somehow, I felt Singapore’s tourist spots often seem to be where least of it’s character shines through. They always seem to be presenting the image that Singapore wants to be seen as rather than what Singapore actually is like.

So during my first consult with Joy, here are some of the places I decided to explore:

The Japanese Cemetery

Beauty World

Playgrounds in Singapore

Wet Market stores

 

After the consult, Joy suggested I look into maybe Beauty World or the Japanese cemetery. Since they were more focused within one location rather than being joined by less tangible factors like the patterns or stores, thus making it easier to focus the direction of my research.

Originally, I thought the Japanese cemetery would be interesting through the eyes of the grave keeper. However, I eventually found out that the man had unfortunately passed away a few years ago.

Thus I turned my sights to Beauty World, a place where I haven’t set foot in, in 15 years. Also a place that 5 year old me regarded as old run down and boring.

Yes I thought it was old and run down THEN.

Imagine my surprise when I arrived in there to find the place looking exactly as I remembered. There were only three food stores picky eater me liked to eat at in the food centre and one toy shop that I visited while waiting for my mom as a child. Every single one was still there, exactly like I remembered. It was a bit unnerving at first. I suppose one thing that definitely changed was the crowds. Perhaps it was the height difference of 15 years but back then, Beauty World felt really really crowded. Being at adult butt level at that time was understandably another unpleasant experience for me to say the least. So what changed? Or what hadn’t that caused this stagnation to happen within this place.

RESEARCH

This is where I angled my research on the place and subsequently presented to the class in Part one of the project:

Beauty World started out as an amusement park in 1942 that catered both to the locals and the Japanese that lived in Singapore during the Japanese occupation. It was a way to lift the spirits of the people during the occupation and give people a place to have fun and relax in. The world Beauty World actually came from the various names of the sections within the amusement park e.g. Happy World.

Aside from the usual amusement park bells and whistles, the place also had wayang and getai performances, gambling and films, altogether a pretty fun place to be.

However when the war ended, the place lost it’s purpose and was losing popularity and soon, it was replaced by something more practical to suit the needs of the people living nearby: Beauty World Market (1947).

The place sold more provisional household items, toys, medicine and food, surprisingly similar to what Beauty World of now provides as well. However due to a slew of electricity, fire and drainage problems, the market was closed down and the tenants shifted across the road into the Beauty World Centre of today in 1984. The building itself was bought over by its 194 tenants and thus most of the stores within the place actually have full rights to their stores and don’t need to pay rent.


After spending an extended amount of time in beauty world interviewing people walking around the mall section of beauty world as well as the food centre here are some of my observations:

  • Most of the visitors are Chinese
  • Most people only come by around lunch and even then, it’s not completely full. For every ten seats at least one would be vacant.
  • The crowd peaks at 12pm-2pm but according to google statistics, it’s only considered “mildly busy” compared to other malls.
  • In a survey I sent out to over 80 people ages ranging from 13-70, 38% have visited beauty world once or twice with the least visiting a lot. Those results were from a group of friends I know from Ngee Ann Poly that visit quite often as it is nearby.

Recent news on Beauty World would be the 17.5 million dollar bid to buy over the food centre on the upper floor. The stores were asked to close by May 2017. However, due to lack of communication and updates between the buyers and the store holders, the bid was rejected. The food centre opened again in late April. However by then business had already been affected. For now, most of them are stuck in a limbo waiting for further news or buyers. This is especially urgent considering the building is almost halfway through it’s 99 year lease. The older it gets, the less attractive the place gets to potential buyers.

This could possibly be the reason why the place felt like it hadn’t changed much despite the amount of time since I last visited. With most of the stallholders in their late 60s and 70s, most of them are simply waiting to cash in their store and retire peacefully. Additionally, with most of them not needing to pay rent, there wasn’t much motivation to improve or change the stores to attract more customers. Instead most of them survive on a customer base built on friendships formed over the years. This was probably why the place felt almost like it was stuck in a limbo. Just waiting for something to happen so that life could go on. It almost felt as if the whole building and it’s tenants were waiting to retire; for something new or better to take their place.


This bittersweet tiredness and fond nostalgia that I gathered from the place while researching and walking around was also deeply reflected in the qualitative part of my research where I interview different tenants around the mall about their thoughts on the place and the future.

I also counterpointed my interview results with footage I got from the location. Things that I found nostalgic, things that I found reminded me of the place as a child and things I thought showed the vibe of the place fairly well:

The interviews really gave me a more intimate perspective of the place, especially since I had to get close and talk face to face with some of these tenants. It especially broke my heart when one of them started crying as well.

Heres the feedback I got from the presentation:

 

PART 2: ZINE

Now that the research was done, now came the hard part of trying to concise the place into it’s essence: How was I going to depict the a place in limbo while keeping the old school colourfulness and nostalgia that is still part of the places makeup?

I went on Pinterest to look for design inspirations. I knew going in I wanted the zine to contain old school elements I found in the place. Like the fonts and the object. I also considered looking into the signboards within the food centre to create a pattern out of it as well. Here are some examples I though about trying.

Source: https://i.pinimg.com/564x/0a/5a/26/0a5a263a3e01b6dd9164513c53766713.jpg Accessed on 26 April 2018

I also thought to do a flatly of all the items within a store like the example below to show the clutter and the items that make up the place:

Source: https://i.pinimg.com/564x/6a/4c/e1/6a4ce19744b91a7b7a43491a6afde09a.jpg Accessed on 26 April 2018

However, I had a lot of left over images that I took while I shot the footage for the research interviews so I was wondering if I could make use of those. A lot of them depicted the clutter and the dingyness of Beauty World very well so I researched on how to combine the two together.

Source: https://i.pinimg.com/564x/f6/87/54/f68754115c6428ea53f8f1f91c1317ef.jpg Accessed on 26 April 2018

I liked how this designer made use of the shape of the font and made it seem like part of the environment and was peaking out from it. I also liked the solid colour of the font that created negative space within the clutter of the image.

Source: https://i.pinimg.com/564x/44/a2/65/44a2656560baa2af93e27d70ff7d7b08.jpg Accessed on: 26 April 2018

I also liked this design because the lines look a bit like blueprints or plans for the future that would tie in well with beauty world’s evident future.

CONSULTATION #1

Combining all this I consulted Joy with my initial art direction:



The picture on the left is taken from one of the provision stores within beauty world. The font is from one of the signboards within the place. Using the word 世 from 美世界 or Beauty World, I played around with the shape to form a frame around the shopkeeper. The font itself because of it’s bright colours also serves to create negative space within the clutter of the space.

Meanwhile on the left page would be a flatly of the items within a shop as well as an excerpt from the interview with the shop owner.

Joy liked the colours and the repurposing of the font as a frame. She also liked that the subject within the image was not looking at the camera and was instead profile. Giving of a sense of loneliness and obscurity within the image.

However, she felt that the clutter of the flatlay one the opposing side of the spread was a bit distracting and suggested I try incorporating it into the environment itself, just like my previous artist reference. Like a blueprint. I could also try repurposing the objects to bring new meaning to the place and also try to make them more like part of the environment.

By the end of the consult, I had a clearer idea as to what art direction I wanted with my zine. I decided to use each of beauty world’s chinese characters within each of the spread. And each spread would focus on one of the three main stores within the place: The Food Centre, The Toy Shop and The Provision Store. I thought this would tie in nicely with the stores of Beauty World Market from old as well as the three main kinds of stores found within the place. I wanted to structure it in a wat that it felt like the viewer was walking through beauty world itself and taking a peek into each of the places.

FRONT COVER:

First Attempt

This was the first attempt for the front cover. I used the original font found on the signboard of beauty world. Combining them together, I tried to form a pattern in the background, overlaid over the image.

However, after consultation with Joy, I took it out as we both found it a bit distracting at the end. Not to mention it altered from the colour of the image as well.

Originally, I also wanted to try getting rid of whoever was left on the escalators with content aware, like how I did with the cover image of this post. While it created and interesting glitchy result, the tech glitch feel didn’t really match with the overall old school vibe of the place.

Final Front cover

I picked the escalators of Beauty world as I felt that a shopping mall’s popularity can often be seen from it’s escalators. In a crowded mall, the escalators are often either full or or everyone on it was either rushing up and down to get to where they want to go. When I was at beauty world, I realised that no one really moved much. Whoever was on it, little as they were just stood on it, waiting, on limbo, to get somewhere. Thus I felt it would be appropriate as a front cover. Additionally, I wanted the viewer to be moving between the stores which were on different levels in the building and so the escalators kinda added to it.

As for the English font, I used a basic font I found on some of the directional  signs within the place. I repeated it with each one more faded than the next, to illustrate how the place is still around but over time, it will eventually fade. But not yet.

Finally, the colours of the spread come from the old school colourful signs of beauty world as well as it’s old school retro amusement park aesthetic. I also made the image dual toned to imitate the effect of newspaper cuttings. This effect will be seen reflected throughout the zine. The font’s colours will thus also be chosen to contrast to the colours of it’s background.

SPREAD #1

Food Centre Attempt #1

This is the first attempt at spread number one. Looking back I feel it was too blue.

Attempt #2

As can be seen, I made use of the illustrations of things I associated with the place and incorporated them into the environment. To emphasise the cramped feeling within the space, I stuffed the 美 word into the background, having it peek from behind the stores, thus making use of with the symmetrical nature of the word so that viewers can still tell it’s the 美 word even though it is half obscured. Additionally, the font of the word is taken from the sign on the far right.

Within the image, you can see small illustrations. Two spoons conversing like stallholders and customer, a woman’s hair has become like the noodles she’s eating because you are what you eat. The woman in the next table is also eating a bowl of noodles (I’m assuming the noodles here are really good since so many people are eating noodles.) This time, I used the English font from the noodle store to form a humanoid figure sitting across from the lady. In a way showing how sometimes your meals are your only companion at lunch.

In the table over, a man and his wife are having a meal. She keeps moving the fishball in her bowl. So I made an actual ball with the word fishball from the font of stall they bought from and placed it within the bowl.

The man sitting across her is falling asleep. His drink seems to be the only thing keeping him awake in that moment. So I made a coffee his seat instead.

After consulting Joy, she said she enjoyed how the illustrations and letterforms came to play within the piece. However, she found the ceiling and floor of the outdoor food centre a bit distracting as they looked a bit like borders within the spread instead. The difference in colour also took attention away from the main image. She also found the natural tilt of the floor in the place a bit distracting. So she suggested I either emphasise it or cover it up.

She suggested since it was raining when I took the image, maybe I could play with the water on the floor outside the food centre.

I decided to use it to show a reflection of the food centre in the past when it was very busy and crowded, like I remembered as a child.

Final Spread 1

I tried looking for images of the food centre in the past but none of it would reflect properly in the water. Thus instead I took the original image and I flipped it onto the floor to create a reflection effect. However, I flipped it and doubled it over as well, thus making it seem like double the amount of people are within the food centre. This also let me hide the distracting tilt on the floor. I also changed the colour of one of the layers so that the reflections will appear slightly more colourful than the dulled out past.

I also cropped out most of the roof area thus showing that the food centre is on the rooftop (it’s unique aspect) while getting rid of the “borders” the image accidentally creates.

SPREAD #2

Attempt #1

I think the main problem I had with this image was trying to find a balance within the background image’s colours. As the toy shop was significant more well lit than the rest of the stores, I couldn’t pick too bright a colour or it would affect the visibility of the illustrations However too dark made it seem too dim and took away a bit of the details within the image.

Spread #2 Final

As you can recognise, I tried to recreate the same effect with the letterform from my original play with the art direction. I liked the use of the font as a framing as well and thus wanted to recreate it over here. I actually went back to beauty world for this shot as I didn’t have a horizontal image of this store that could spread over the two pages. It was quite sad for me to realise that the uncle was actually closing his store, in the middle of a clearance sale. That’s why most of the toys were gone. What is in the image is all that is left of this little “Happy World”(The name of the store).

Thus with the illustrations of the old school toys I found there, I tried to create a world using the stacks of toy boxes. There was this overlying sense of waiting and ending that I got from the place that I wanted to convey with this spread.

I always hated the toy crocodile games where you had to press the teeth of the crocodile expecting it to clamp it’s jaws. Thus I placed them in the middle of the boxes like a pit of danger. The rubber duckies at the top sitting on the hoop and in the cage are to create a sense of anticipation and waiting for them to fall down to the waiting jaws. After I illustrated out the water guns, I though they looked quite futuristic and so I changed them to look like skyscrapers in the background, like a futuristic skyscraper blueprint in comparison to the lower “buildings” created by the old boxes.

To add to the futuristic factor, I also illustrated the toy cars and had the baby dolls sitting off the side ride away in them. Kind of like how the children are all moving away from such toys now. Finally, for the uncle in the image (you heard him in the interview), he is sitting behind the window, formed by the letterform, away from the toy world. He was doing paperwork for the closing of the store. He too was preparing to move on and progress ahead. To symbolise that, I gave him a futuristic toy helmet as well.

SPREAD #3:

Attempt #1

The final spread was the on the provision shop. I felt that the colours of the first attempt of this spread were a bit too similar to the first so I updated it again.

Attempt #2

I think one difference with this spread from the rest would be it’s lack of human subjects. Not for the lack of trying of course but there was just no one in the store at all. Thus I decided to play around with the letterform instead. Especially considering the font looks a bit like a human with their arms spread anyway.

While I was alright with the usual incorporation of the objects into the environment, aI wasn’t completely satisfied with their placement and use. Yes they are things I noticed hidden away in the cluttered store and I placed them as such within the image but something felt missing.

Additionally, after consultation with Joy, she felt that the objects felt like they were going in different directions and thus could be a bit confusing to the viewer as to what is the main point amid all the clutter.

Thus after consulting a few other classmates, a common trend I realise was pointed out was that the objects looked like they were almost falling off the shelves. I thought that was a nice point and would emphasise the clutter and cramped nature of the Beauty World provision shops nicely.

Spread #3 Final

As you can see there are some major changes. I darkened one of the tones within the image so that the yellow would contrast better within the image.

The chicken bowl I placed it within a fish bowl (yes its on purpose. I found it amusing how the whole section on bowls for food had fish bowl included as well). However I stacked it in a way that it appears that the bowls are almost toppling on the world itself.

There are also a few other pairs within the image like the pans and boxes to emphasise how there are a lot of the same things stacked side by side together. Unlike modern stores where the stocks are kept in the back and one display item is out front, old school provision shops have EVERYTHING on display. What you see is what you get. A porridge cooker is quite out of place with the pot cleaners just like certain misplaced items within the store.

The cane and teapot hand off the shelves also add the how things seem to be almost falling off or hung up out of convenience. As for the pineapple lantern on the ceiling, there was one outside the store and I figured it added to the old school aesthetic.

Now everything in the image is either pointing towards the 界 or falling on it. Kinda like how when a person enters the store, everything seems to either be unmoving and watching you in the dingy quietness of the store or falling on you in a surprise attack.

Back Cover:

The back cover corresponds to the front except this time you’re taking the escalator to leave the mall. It says” Thank you for shopping!” at the back thus rounding up your whole trip through the zine as one shopping trip in beauty world.

CONCLUSION

Here are all the spreads together:
Overall I’m quite satisfied with my zine. I didn’t take the very direct approach in trying to point out the nostalgia and bittersweetness of the place in a more obvious manner because I felt that the vibes one could get from the images and the people within it would be enough to bring the message. The use of fonts was mainly to create negative space within the clutter and to draw people’s eyes to the illustrations of the same colour as well. The coloured illustrations are of the things that make each location within the mall special, little things that stood out to me when I was there that triggered memories. I feel that is the common experience with many that visits beauty world and that is what I wanted to achieve with this zine.

When someone thinks old school, they think faded and dull. Now after this project, I think old school is cluttered and oh too colourful with just a touch of whimsical longing.

I think it’s safe to say Singapore isn’t very lame to me anymore after this project. Not Beauty World at least.

Feedback from my classmates!

THANK YOU FOR SHOPPING!

 

 

Project 2: Forrest Gump

 

[ Introduction ]

When I first heard this project was based on movie quotes, I was very excited since I loved watching movies and movie quotes were something that I always took note of. Sometimes the writers for these movies know the exact words to express exactly how you feel. And in that moment, that quote just speaks to you. I love it when that happens.

I knew that the designs could not be a literal representation of the movie but instead an abstract representation of what we felt about the quote itself. This gave the whole project a more personal feel and an added layer of challenge which was very exciting to me.

[ Let the fun begin ]

 1. “Quit blowing smoke up my ass, you’ll ruin the autopsy.”    

– Meet Joe Black (1998)

 

I love the biting sarcasm and cynicism in the quote. Meet Joe Black was a movie about a rich man, Bill, who was coerced into being Death’s tour guide in exchange for time to settle his affairs and the relationships in his family.

Bill, played by Anthony Hopkins and Joe, or Death, played by Brad Pitt. Source: http://ilarge.lisimg.com/image/1175770/852full-meet-joe-black-screenshot.jpg Accessed on 22 Oct 2017

I think this quote was by far the easiest to work with. I knew from the start what part of the quote I wanted to focus on. “Blowing smoke up my ass.”

I looked up into what that slang means. It means to complement someone insincerely or hiding certain parts of your true feelings..

This made me start thinking about lying and what it did to people.

Source: https://i.pinimg.com/736x/7f/bf/39/7fbf396b1234209ed0c887b8b932476f–godfather-art-the-godfather-movie.jpg Accessed on 22 Oct 2017

I was inspired by the movie posters for The Godfather. A man dressed in a black suit, with darkness that conceals a large part of him giving an element of mystery and danger to him.

Original design

For my initial design, I had a man in a black suit wearing a goat skull as they are often associated with the devil because of the shape of the horns. The devil is symbolic of deceiving, lying and manipulation which were the issues that I was trying to address with my piece. The man wearing the skull concealing his face could have two meanings. Either that the man’s thoughts have been influenced by the devil or that the man was the devil himself.

The man is literally blowing smoke. The initial smoke I was trying did not read well on threshold which was the effect I intended to use on the piece in photoshop. The smoke needed more line work. However I didn’t want the smoke to seem too cartoonish as well since it would clash with the realistic features of the man.

I chanced upon a picture of distorted faces. I decided to crop out a few faces to form the shape of smoke. It turned out pretty well. I felt this gave an additional meaning to the man’s smoking. How what he says about people is often distorted and untrue; most of the time ugly.

The man is also holding a scythe, firstly as a shoutout to the movie’s main character “Death” or “Joe Black” I also partially concealed it in the darkness to show the hidden danger of this individual.

During my first consult, Joy liked the design and the additional layer created by the smoke. Even though they weren’t noticeable off the bat, having something for the audience to notice after looking longer gave it more depth. Additionally she liked how the smoke and the scythe balanced each other on the image. However, she felt the scythe was too literal and suggested changing it into a mouth.

Updated design

This is the updated design. I changed the blade of the scythe to a toucan’s mouth to show how our words and what we say is what is the real danger to others. During the second consult, Joy was okay with majority of this but only felt that the scythe should align with the tie so that it creates a leading line.

This is the final design that I printed onto my tote bag.

Final Design

 

Quote #2

“What if I fall? Oh but my darling, what if you fly?”

– Peter Pan (1953)

Original design

I had a rough idea for this design by the second consult with Joy. The basic image of the hands controlling paper aeroplanes to reach the child’s mobile. However, Joy felt that this was still too literal a representation of the quote in terms of it being about chasing and flying up to my dreams. She asked me to find a deeper relation of the quote to myself.

Thinking on the concept of chasing my dreams more, I felt a bit cynical about it. I thought about how dream chasing wasn’t as easy as movies made it up to be. Dreams needed funding, and while all we see are the success stories, many dreams my not be what we expect and sometimes, quite often, they crash and burn.

So for my second consult, I updated my image and made the paper planes out of Singapore thousand dollar bills and made some of them crash into the planets hanging on the mobile.

Updated design

Joy felt that this was a more put together version of the design and it’s message was much clearer. However, she felt that the dollar bills weren’t as clear as we can only see a bit of Yusof Ishak’s face and a bit of the numbers. She also felt that in terms of design properties, I could try shifting some of the aeroplanes so that all their directions of flight were in line and created a subtle leading line up towards the planets. She also suggested putting some smoke that could balance the large hand on the bottom left of the image.

This is the final design that I presented.

Final design

I cropped and edited the shape of the dollar bill so more of it could be squeezed onto the shaper of the paper planes. I also shifted some of the flight directions of  some planes so that they all look like they are flying roughly in the same direction. Lastly I added a larger paper plane falling back towards the hand. It leaves behind a trail of smoke which overall balances the large hand at the bottom.

Quote #3

“It does not do to dwell on dreams and forget to live.”

– Harry Potter and the Philosopher’s Stone (2001)

On the flip side compared to the previous quote, my interpretation of this one is a lot more hopeful. I love this quote from the first Harry Potter movie and it was always an encouragement when it came to school and trying to motivate myself. I felt that often times, when the workload got tough, I tended to retreat into myself and procrastinate by daydreaming. It was a bad habit that lead to a lot of rushed assignments in the past. It always left me with a certain sense of regret. How was that very well developed daydream about making a zombie movie complete with character arc and design going to stop me from failing school and actually learning the skills needed to film movies in the first place?

Thus I related to this quote greatly. I wanted to portray the sense of reluctance and danger I felt when it actually came to chasing dreams and my desire to cut myself off my bad habit of hiding in my daydreams before it is too late.

Initial design

This is the initial design. To portray my daydreaming, I placed floating balloons to show a sense of weightlessness in the image. I had a lot of trouble with this because many images of balloons disappeared the moment I used threshold and half tone did not have the effect I desired in the image. To solve this issue, I made eyeballs using vectors on parts of the balloons where the shapes weren’t visible. This gave a sense that the whole mass of balloons were actually eyeballs. I also made sure that none of the eyeballs were looking down on the earth which I chose to represent reality. I also placed hands holding cotton candy out to represent the distractions and various daydreams that turn me away from looking at what’s happening in real life. Finally, I placed a falling girl that has just cut herself off from her daydreaming and taking the risk to fall to earth for her dreams.

Joy and the rest of my consult group mates liked the whimsical surreal vibe of this piece. However, Joy suggested that since the main subject of was the girl, I should darken her and make her more prominent if not the large dark mass of balloon eyes will steal the audience attention away from her.  Joy also suggested that I turn the cotton candy clouds to point subtly at the girl to lead the viewer’s eyes more to her.

Updated and final design

This is my final design. In order to lighten the darkness of the balloons, I added more eyes and eye whites. I darkened the girl and her hair so that the contrast between her and the background will draw the viewer’s attention more.

I tried to point the cotton candy clouds towards the girl but I felt that it the weird angles detracted from their original intention to create a sense of sky and height from the earth. So instead I altered the size and positioning of some clouds and used them to form the path from which the girl would fall so it would seem like she is falling through the clouds. As you can see from the design, the darkest elements within the picture are the balloons, the girl and the earth. The decreasing amount of balloons form a subtle arrow towards the girl and the gravity and direction of the girls descent will draw the viewer’s eyes towards the earth. This thus allows the viewer’s eyes to follow the girls journey down to reality with her as well.

Quote #4

“I never look back darling, it distracts from the now.”

– The  Incredibles (2004)

I love Edna Mode from The Incredibles. She is very decisive, efficient and did not take anything sitting down. Basically everything I wanted to be as a kid. But now that I’m older and I have the benefit of hindsight, I could see a certain flaw in her philosophy. I get that sometimes, being stuck on past failures could hinder your confidence in trying again.

However, I can see the wisdom in remembering failures and their purpose in improving. Even Edna Mode herself stopped using capes because some superheroes died because of their capes; a fatal design flaw. I felt that in order to succeed in the future, one always has to look back in the past for guidance.

Source: https://media.giphy.com/media/dePaPOPNSLDsk/giphy.gif Accessed on 22 Oct 2017

 

To show that wisdom, I used an owl which is  symbolic of wisdom. I also chose an owl because of their ability to turn their heads 360 degrees to look behind and all around them. The owl is wearing a pair of glasses (shoutout to Edna) with which one lens is replaced with a clock to show looking through the past.

The body of the owl is made up of hydrangeas which in the Victorian era was symbolic of pride, because it was a plant with many flamboyant  flowers but very little seed. I wanted to use this to portray the pride of the body still facing forward and turning it’s back on the past.

Lastly, I perched the owl on top of a weighing scale to represent choice.

With this piece I tried to play with asymmetry to show how the side that is looking through the past is weighed more heavily by the mistakes but is also the “heavier” and more suitable choice.

In terms of design elements, I made the owl head larger than normal as it is the main subject of the image. I also left one lens open, so that people will notice the owl first. It’s been psychologically proven that human beings seek out eyes on images first before everything else.

I did not have time to consult Joy for this design, however, during the critique, she suggested that while my subject is still very obvious, it’s importance in the image could be greatly multiplied if the size of the scale wasn’t as big. She also suggests that the weights of the scale could be nearer to the bar as well to form an overall triangular shape with the forms, thus making the elements of the piece seem more in harmony with each other.

[ Silk Screen Printing ]

Joy warned me that the blackness of my design might be hard to print. But I never thought it would be this hard. The whole process before of coating the screen with the emulsion and exposing the screens was alright, fun even.

Washing the exposed screen in the red room

 

Exposed screen after washing

But the nightmare came in terms of printing on the back. Due to the amount of ink needed, there was never enough to reach the bottom of the design.

Attempt #1: What even is this???

Running over the design a second time would get rid of all the small details, especially in the smoke.

Attempt #2: Tried going over it twice. It’s too dark. Now he looks like the Darlie man’s shady older brother.

The work-study that day, Clara, suggested I spread the ink on the screen first before placing it back on the bag and running it over once with the squeegee.

Attempt #3: Much better with Clara’s new method. Still a bit dark so some details are lost. One last bad left, one last try.

Attempt #4: Finally!

Thank God it worked. There were  still small patches of white near the bottom but this was my most detailed print yet and I filled the holes in with a paintbrush. (Bet you can’t tell eh?) So overall, a success. Shoutout to Clara for being my saviour.

[ Final critique from Joy ]

Good attempt in conveying my meanings behind the quotes. Good use of design elements to clearly draw the attention of the viewers to the main subject.

Critique from classmates:

Thanks everyone. 🙂