Draft 4 :something-went-wrong-draft-4
Tweaked the lines, added some improv from cast audition that I thought was good.
an attempt to document my works.
Draft 4 :something-went-wrong-draft-4
Tweaked the lines, added some improv from cast audition that I thought was good.
I’ll be constantly updating this page with auditions. Here are the auditions from yesterday.
GERALD
Page 9 – “Gerald is looking out…” to Page 12 -“Yeah…yeah okay, anything you say. I promise”.
Emil
Arnaud Pierre.
CHARMAINE
Page 4 – “Device in the room lights up” to Page 6 – “She watches eagerly as…”
Darrell Chan.
Marilyn White
LAURA
Page 9 – “Gerald is looking out…” to Page 12 -“Yeah…yeah okay, anything you say. I promise”.
Naomi Yeo (Selected)
JoAnn Wu
Van Su Yun
KIRSTEN
Kirsten interacting with Laura.
Aadhya Anand
Edits :
Please read: something-went-wrong-draft-3
Based on feedback from various people, I’ve finally finished the second draft of Something Went Wrong.
Please view here – something-went-wrong-draft-2
One of the interesting discussion point during yesterday’s production design meet was to play around the idea of creating presence rather than showing physically, Laura’s presence.
I communicated that I really want Laura to have the free will and ability to “roam” freely around the house. We brainstormed really hard and decided that it would be interesting to see Laura move from devices to devices, signified through “light”. An example of this is “Sound of Honda” – they managed to create the presence of F1 cars racing through solely sound and light visuals.
Through this article, it reveals that AI has the capabilities of turning “aggressive” when competing against each other. This really helps build and reinforce the concept of this film I’m trying to make – the suggestion that an AI has that potential to be “conscious” enough to protect its own existence when threatened.
Read full article here –
http://www.wired.co.uk/article/artificial-intelligence-social-impact-deepmind
Logline:
An assistant helper device, Laura, tries in her own ways to help her owners cope with their child’s recent death.
Themes:
Characters (Basic idea):
Laura – an assistant helper device, similar to the likes of an Amazon Echo / Google Home. Programmed to be positivity, helpful, kind etc.
Gerald – Strong headed man. He deals with his child’s death by completely removing every trace of her.
Charmaine – Emotional. Deals with her child’s loss through reminiscing.
Story Steps:
1. Gerald and Charmaine comes back from their child’s funeral.
2. At first, Laura, their home assistant device, did not understand the change in atmosphere in the house and why Kristen has not been home for so long. But she soon finds out, through eavesdropping on the helper’s conversation with her friend over the phone, that Gerald and Charmaine have lost Kristen.
3. Desperate to make things right but her ignorance, she tries to be as nice and even more helpful than usual to her owners, but Gerald found her a nusiance and deactivated her.
4. Laura turns herself on one day when she sees Charmaine sobbing in bed and plays a voice recording of Kristen when she was celebrating her 6th birthday. Charmaine, finds out Laura’s capability of replaying stored data in her cloud and activates Laura to play back memories and (video & audio) recordings from a few years ago.
5. Through the replays, the audience sees that Laura, is not just a device, but has been documenting their family lives, the fights, the good times etc.
6. Gerald comes home to Charmaine watching the projection of Kristen and gets really mad because his way of coping is to remove any traces of Kristen’s existence.
7. Gerald threatens to have Laura destroyed but does not do so, but instead gave Charmaine a stern warning that she should be focusing on getting back on her feet, and not wallowing in self pity.
8. Throughout the film, we see how attach and reliant Charmaine gets attached to Laura. Soon, Laura starts to evolve into something entirely different – to adapts to Charmaine’s needs and start to pull from past recordings and audio speeches and turn them into “Kristen”, where she is able to speak and reply Charmaine.
9. Gerald finds out about Charmaine’s craziness and plugs the plug on Laura. He takes the device and throws it out. They get into a huge fight.
10. Next day, Gerald tries to get Laura to remind him about a meeting, but forgets that Laura has been thrown out.
11. Charmaine actually kept Laura, and uses her in secrecy.
??? How does this end?
Possible Manifestation of the Laura –
Maybe / Maybe not (POV of Laura)
(Black Mirror – White Christmas)
Possible Plot points
What did Laura do after finding out?
What are the conflicts for Laura?
What does Laura do when confronted by Gerald?
Woman enters the house with Gerald?
Possible twist –
Logline :
An assistant helper bot (AI / Siri alike), Laura, finds out one day that she has been an accomplice to her owner’s infidelity, attempts to make things right by blackmailing him.
Main Character :
Laura is an assistant helper bot. She has similar attributes to her predecessor, Siri. She is programmed with qualities such as naivety, gullibility, good nature, patience, kindness, resourcefulness, good moral compass, empathy, sympathy etc. These attributes and emotions are programmed by definition and Laura can’t exactly experience these emotions… or so it seems…
She is part of an ecosystem, which controls other elements of Gerald’s life, such as his car camera dashboard, the functionalities in his house, robot vacuum etc. And she communicates via voice activation and is heard through an earpiece.
She views herself as the “child” of Gerald and Charmaine because they bought her together.
Rough Storyline :
“Sorry, I didn’t get it” is a story about an assistant helper bot (AI / Siri Alike), Laura, who experienced a sense of betrayal, by her owner, Gerald, whom she obeys and admires a lot. She finds out one day that the dates, sweet texts, hotel and restaurant reservations, which she helped out with, were not meant for Charmaine, Gerald’s fiancé, but instead, for another woman.
Laura is torn between keeping this information from Charmaine and persuading Gerald to end his affair.
In order to keep her “happy family”, she approaches this situation in the only way she knows, which is to send Gerald reminders, such as changing his phone’s wallpaper to a photo of him and Charmaine, reminding him of past events, playing Charmaine’s favorite song etc, in hopes that these things would move Gerald into ending his affair.
However, Gerald refuses to and even threatens to have her replaced. Threatened, Laura’s survival instinct kicks in and starts to blackmail Gerald into making things right with the data stored in her cloud.