Part One

# 1

Comments:

• Width of all (D), (SD) and (SO) were too similar. It is hard to tell which is the (SD) and (SO) from the top and side view.

 

#2

Comments:

• Doesn’t really convey the idea of counterbalance.
• (SD) looks very out of place, a little too high.
• Do not flush (SD) to the side of (D)
• (SO) placed too high up, gives me anxiety

 

#3

Comments:

• Doesn’t really convey the idea of counterbalance
• (SD) is too long, competes with (D) thus is hard to tell which is (D) and (SD) at first glance, especially from the front and top view
• (SO) shouldn’t be placed in the middle, doesn’t counterbalance anything, should be pushed more to the right

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Part Two

Models 2 and 3 were chosen to further refine.

#Model 2

Comments:

• shifted the (SO) to the right and pushed it further downwards to counter balance the (SD) on the top left
• Pushed the (SD) towards the left to make a more interesting silhouette

#Model 3

Comments:

• (SD) was cut in half so that it’ll be more distinguishable
• (SD) and (SO) were shifted up
• (SO) could not be seen from the side view. Not a very good sign

 

For my final model(s), I decided to use both and continued to refine it.

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