Doing this layout was much easier for me as I knew clearly what needed to be changed. The golden section helped me a lot too in deciding how I can balance the frame. I also realised when you turn the golden section and flip it around you can get many layouts that are interesting!

For this, my kerning for the hills bear castles were too much so it looks confusing at where the words ends. Some words didn’t need to be bold too.

This is my final layout.

I’m really satisfied from where I began with my first layout. I see now my mistakes and I can see the mood finally being conveyed well in this layout. I’m really happy!