I’ve received comments about these two designs:
The left one:
I’m not like a *regular* mom, I’m a *cool* mom.
Too many tattoos and they should be executed better.
The right one:
1st rule of magic: Always be the smartest guy in the room.
It is not clear the idea of “smartest”. May be a good idea to make the guy into a scientist(someone smart).
Hence I made the changes:
Lessen the tattoos and made it more obvious that the son and her have matching tattoos. I made the picture more contrast as there were grey tones.
I also put a old fashioned microscope and made the body of the character be seen more. He is wearing a science lab coat.
These are my final images along with my tote bag print and silkscreen: