Final refinement

Feedback from Peers:

  • no distinct lines
  • play with the title – very static – break it up
  • move to the right – Jump St(art) – brackets colour or capitalise
  • the main drive of shape
  • create tension point – focus point – created by lines and etc
  • move up- twist shapes
  • a little bottom heavy – lift closer
  • the orientation of shapes
  • introduce colour
  • Jumpstart could have shadow

As I only had Monday and Tuesday of the final week to tweak my work as I was travelling up until Sunday, I should have let myself have more time to explore the colour range.

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