Task 3: Design Refinement & Mock Up

Task 3A: Readability and Legibility



Design Refinements:

Feedback from Peers:

  • no outline
  • more details – strings and palette
  • confetti – vibrant, joy
  • continue splash
  • look into text details – a different voice emphasis – play with size and orientation
  • the orientation of shapes – how to play with the elements
  • try a different palette
  • add Jurong Health Logo – monochrome can do
  • accent – 3D the objects like the tube


The two different colours look like day an night unintentionally. I prefer the light blue one as it is brighter and more cheerful.

Added the logo. found it difficult to place



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