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Hi all, this will be the last part of my whole zine process.
After consultation, Mimi suggested that it would be best if I just focused on the monster in this zine. So I had to churn out a narrative. In this case, I thought it would be best if my whole narrative was about a monster that causes terror and destruction in the society (Jurong). So this monster would morph into buildings and things which meant that he destroyed the buildings. Furthermore, I went with the colour red and black since it looks more sinister and dark. So here is the original colour scheme that I had in mind.
The feedback I got was to make the red brighter, to make it pop, since that is the essence of the whole zine.
Moreover, I was thinking to make the tentacles on the bridge a little bigger since they look really small compared to the bridge. I wanted to make it look as if the monster overpowers the bridge.
Moving on, I made the red brighter, drew my designs and I encountered a problem. It is of course again, the typography.
Firstly, I tried out the capitalised handwritten typography. To me it looks too angry and in your face. It probably looks okay in this spread, but when I tried it on other spreads, it doesn’t look too good. Hence, I changed it.
Next, I tried to write a little bit neater. However, it doesn’t bring out the feels of the ravaging part. I realised when I scribbled the words as a draft, it looks much more genuine. Thus, I went ahead with that.
So here’s the final typography that I went with.
Just like that, I’m done with the designs for this zine. I printed this zine on Munken Lynx paper, 120gsm, that I got from RJ Paper. The contrast of the red and grey on the white background made the designs pop even more.
Enough of typing, I’ll now show you my final outcome!!
(back and front cover when it is flipped open)
DESIGNS ON SCREEN
After rounds and rounds of consultations with Mimi, I finally came to a conclusion of just focusing on this monster for my narrative. It makes the whole theme and whole narrative flow much better and in sync.
One thing I regretted most was my font/typography. I should have made the font smaller. After printing it, I realised the font was really too big and in your face. If I were to make this zine again, I’ll definitely make the font smaller. Also, I should have experimented more on handwritten typography.
Another thing is that I think that I would want to push myself further if there was a next time. I would try again with my initial blue tinted photos with white drawings for my zine. (who knows, I might make one during this holiday)
Overall, in conclusion, this was a really fun and fruitful project. Getting to finally create a zine of my own and feeling accomplished after I submitted it makes me feel like I am a true and real designer. I’m definitely looking forward to see how different my zines will turn out in Y2! 🙂
Hi all, so this will be my second process about my Zine.
As seen in Part 1, I wanted a blue hue. So I went onto illustrator to try it out. However, as you can see, it is too structured. I felt that hand-drawing it would look even better. So i stopped here and made a new drawing.
So here’s the one that i drew on. But the cons of this is that the tentacles ain’t as clear as the eyes. Also, one of the feedback that I got from Mimi was that since I’m going for a more ‘fun’ theme, I can extend out of the picture/canvas.
So yeahhh, i drew out of the lines and it looks nicer. But the feedback I received from friends are : Do you have to make the picture blue? Cause it doesn’t look like it fits the picture as a whole. So I changed the colour of the whole thing.
I tried black and white. But still doesn’t look as nice.
So finally, I decided to go for colours. Also, the feedback i got for this was to remove the frame around the photo and the extra space at the bottom. And I can change the colour of the building to be blue. (like previous designs)
So here it is. I agree that it looks much more put together compared to the rest.
RANDOM IN PROGRESS WORKS
Here are some random works I came up with while I was forcefully trying to fit in with the blue theme before deciding on the coloured theme. (These are works that I rejected)
Time is precious, use it wisely. But I thought I could add the bear to signify that it is precious and you shouldn’t let others ‘steal’ it??? (I’m sorry if I don’t make sense)
So here’s after I remove the bear.
I was wanting to make this into something like a rib-cage, but somehow I didn’t like it so I scraped the idea.
1ST DRAFT FRONT AND BACK COVER
Continuing on, here are my mockups for the front and back cover together with the layouts inside. The title/topic I was going for was “Jurong through my perspective”.
When Mimi saw this, her reaction wasn’t good at all. So of course I had to scrape the idea.
This is too messy and has nothing much to do with my main point. It is just all over and everywhere.
For this one, I couldn’t seem to fit any other elements from my zine layouts except for the tentacle monster. The rest just seems out of place.
A collage of the things that I will include in my zine. But just too messy and it looks bad.
1ST DRAFT LAYOUT
These are my layouts for my zine.
This is a drawing of a sperm whale getting stuck in between the bridge. (Mimi said this works well)
This architecture at Jurong Central Park is supposed to represent a hen’s nest. However, it feels too forced and cute. So Mimi said it doesn’t work well with the monster that I drew.
Also, this is too forced and doesn’t look good T_T (It’s a last minute thing that i came up with……)
This is also too forced and the actual architecture cannot be seen clearly.
This has the same problem as the hen’s. Too cute.
Instead of thinking so much about this and that, why not just focus on the monster/cthulu/tentacle looking thing since that is my main focus. So I will need a story that revolves around this monster. Hence, all of these were made in vain :’) but it’s okay.
Hi all, sorry for the late uploads. In part 1, I’ll be talking about my research and some of my process/developments.
So my concept was doing illustrations on photography. These are some of the stuff that I found on pinterest. I thought that these could inspire me to get started.
Since I would be doing illustrations, these are some examples of illustrations by various artists.
Layout designs inspiration? 🙂
And here’s a cool children illustration book that Mimi recommended. Sadly, I couldnt get a hold of it since someone else borrowed the book from the library. So here’s a image I found online. It is called “little big books” by Geltalten.
Firstly, I went with the blue hue for my photos.
I thought they look really nice. These are some of the edited photos:
Following that, I continued to work on my concept of illustrations on photographs.
This was the first outcome. The feedback I got was that it was nice with the blue hues/tint and stuff, but Mimi would prefer me to focus in terms of architecture and not nature and I could see the disappointment T.T
Then I tried to do something else but this time, in colour:
The lines weren’t as clean in photoshop, so I tried out illustrator to recreate the mailman:
After this consultation, I scrapped the idea of drawing on nature. But I realised that drawing on a living creature is easier than drawing on architecture. However, the difficulty of drawing something on architecture? That is the challenge I will have to overcome.
The place that I got was Jurong West/Jurong East.
For this, I am probably just focusing more on Jurong East instead of both places.
Anyway, these are some snippets when I went to Jurong East to explore. There aren’t many photos/places since it kept raining recently. (Bad luck T_T)
But no worries since I’ll be exploring more of Jurong East this weekend.
Places I’m planning to visit next:
“Jurong” is probably derived from several meanings in Malay. One of the terms could probably refer to the word for shark, “Jerung“.
(that’s why I’m definitely visiting the fishing port)
Places that I MIGHT visit:
Thanks for reading !
In this post, I will share with you about my processes when creating the final four designs!
Firstly, I will start off with my surname, “Ow Yong”.
(and I removed the spacing between my surname)
Following that, it will be my chinese name, “Shu Yi”
Here’s my favourite design of my name.
And here’s the process for my last design!
Thanks for reading !
These are my finalised designs for “Que Sera Sera”.
I tried to play a lot with semiotics and negative space. I will just briefly talk about the significance of each job I chose since I didn’t get to do so during the very short and rushed presentation. Hope you guys like it!
Reason why I chose to be a hairdresser is because my mum used to learn about hairdressing skills. She used to cut my hair when I was young and that caused me to be fascinated by how hairdressing works. I used the two “O”s from my surname and made it into a scissors. For the rest of the other letters, I added this wavy curvy lines or strokes to the font to resemble hair.
Reason why I chose electrician is that I was totally inspired by how my dad is able to fix our household appliances and electronic gadgets without having to get someone else to fix it! And you don’t often see a female electrician so :^) Anyway, I played with negative spaces for this design. For the “H” and “Y”, I added a plug and for the “U”, I added a light bulb.
3. Race Car Driver
This was my favourite piece out of the 4 designs I have. For this design, I played with negative space to create a sports car out of the “E”. And also i replaced the “D” with a race flag and warped it to the shape of a D. The inspiration for this piece came from the game I played on my PS1 and PS2 when I was younger, “Gran Turismo”. It is a racing game that I used to play together with my brother and my dad. Check it out if you have time!
The last design took me forever to come up with it. And I was wondering what comes hand in hand with a baker. Yes, bread! (it sounds like Brenda too) So I realised that why not use a french loaf? Yes, that’s what the “E” is. And of course the “D” is a rolling pin so as to add more context to it. I received comments ranging from one end to the other. Some saying that it is obvious that the job is a baker while others told me that they can’t seem to figure out the job. :”)
But I hope you guys like it