PRESENTATION DAY GALLERY
INDIVIDUAL WORKS
OVERALL FEEDBACK & REFLECTION
Some of the feedback from my peers included that they liked the Astrologer and Hypnotist composition, the interesting composition and interactive approach (Hypnotist) of my work, however Mimi mentioned that the major problem of my work is legibility. My initially idea is to take one step further by using destruction method, to rearranging the letters in a way that the audience need to find it and I use portrait instead of landscape orientation, again, its part of my planning, the reason why I use portrait for some of my works is because I feel portrait can better represent my ideas(eg, model, model audition form is in portrait orientation). Moreover, the printing did not turn out so well which affected my final work.
Overall, to be honest I was quite disheartened with my final product for this project. I really thought it could’ve been better if I have consult Mimi about my ideas about legibility and orientation issue before hand. I feel that my work was not at my best because of the my busy schedule (HOCC and hall committee issues). 🙁 Just a lesson learnt on this day to be kept aside for another, no more assumption, and learn to have a better time management.
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